We're just getting underway and already have some great progress being made.
Thanks Jay, some good suggestions in there. Have you ever tried recording yourself rapping? I can't quite read how you intend for some of these lines to flow and I'd been keen to hear what it is you're hearing in your head when you read/write them.The one thing I keep find myself going back and re-writing lines for is trying to ensure the song's voice belongs to the 99%, rather than being an outside observer. We've all, to a greater or lesser extent, been that sucker that believed if he worked hard enough for long enough he'd somehow make it.